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| Subject: L O S T - The Alternate Story [A LOST Fanfic] Wed May 26, 2010 8:05 am | |
| L O S T - The Alternate Story is basically, LOST with some new characters and the originals. This is based when they crash on the island, however things happen differently, this story will have it's own mysteries, and of course, we still have Smokey! It's written out like a script so when I post up the weekly chapters it wont take too long. I'm still looking for some characters to add so PM me with there details(i.e. Name, Age, Gender, Origin and Flashback). Enjoy the fan fiction and post away [If you'd like to, even include some theories!] Main Characters ( Status) Matt Goldman ( Unknown) Sayid Jarrah ( Alive) Melissa Grace ( Alive) Anthony Rudd ( Unknown) Jack Shephard ( Alive) James "Sawyer" Ford ( Alive) Season One Chapters ( Centricity) 1. How it all began ( Matt) - Spoiler:
Chapter 1 - How it all Began
Centricity - Matt
Written by - Starky
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[Shot of Matt's eye opening, looks up to see flames everywhere and hears people screaming. Matt gets up and sees a man[Sayid] whose arm is stuck under some metal. As Matt begins to run over and help Sayid, another man[Sawyer] runs towards him to help]
MATT: Thanks, let's lift this!
SAWYER: Quit yappin' and lift boy!
[The two of them lift up the piece of metal]
MATT: Hey, you okay?
[Sayid's eyes open]
SAYID: ..huh, my arm, I can't move it...
[Matt hears Jack calling to help lift some metal to save a man. He along with Locke and one other run over]
JACK:Give me a hand.
MATT: Gotcha.
JACK: On the count of 3: 1, 2, 3!
[The 4 of them lift off the piece of metal]
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[The shock has ended and the survivors are all sitting around on the beach waiting to be "Rescued". A woman walks over to Matt]
MELISSA: Excuse me, you wouldn't have a pen would you?
MATT: No sorry.
MELISSA: Ah, thanks anyway...
MATT: Wait, here there was one on the ground.
[Matt hands Melissa the pen]
MELISSA: Oh, thank you!
[Melissa walks off]
MATT: Today is gonna be a long day...
[Matt sits down]
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[Matt's Flashback #1]
[Matt is seen sitting in a cab]
CAB DRIVER: Where to sir?
MATT: Airport please.
CAB DRIVER: Right away sir.
[Matt's cellphone begins to ring, "Eye of the Tiger" by Survivor is his ringtone]
MATT: Hello?
???: Have you gotten there yet?
MATT: No not yet. I'm in the cab at the moment.
???: Well hurry up, you have to deliver that package before you get on the plane.
MATT: Yeah I know, don't worry about it.
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[Day has changed to dusk, Matt has managed to find a pillow and sets up a small tent using a piece of metal as a roof and some bamboo to hold it up]
SAYID: Hello, I would like to thank you for earlier. [Sayid puts out his hand]
MATT: Don't worry about it. [Shakes his hand] Names Matt Goldman.
SAYID: Jarrah, Sayid Jarrah.
MATT: Nice to meet you Mr. Jarrah.
SAYID: Please call me Sayid.
MATT: Alright then, Sayid.
SAYID: Listen, me and two others are going to build a signal fire before it get's completely dark, would you like to join us?
MATT: Yeah, I'd rather do something helpful around here than nothing.
[Two people come up behind Sayid, these are Melissa Grace and Anthony Rudd]
SAYID: Meet Melissa and Anthony. Melissa, Anthony, this is Matt, he's agreed to help us.
Anthony: Excelent, we could use an extra set of hands.
[The four make their way into the jungle]
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[Matt's Flashback #2]
[Matt get's out of the cab and walks over to the bank, not the airport]
EMPLOYEE: Hello sir, how may I help you today? [She smiled]
MATT: Yeah hi, I have a package to drop off for Mr. Robinson.
EMPLOYEE: Ah yes, just one moment, I'll get him on the phone.
EMPLOYEE: Hello sir, I have somebody with a package here for you. His name? Hold on a sec, excuse me sir, may ask your name please?
MATT: Matt Goldman.
EMPLOYEE: A Mr. Matt Goldman is his name. Uh-huh. Okay, certainly will do. Mr. Goldman, Mr. Robinson shall be with you in just a few minutes.
MATT: Thanks, I'm just gonna take a seat over here.
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[In the Jungle]
SAYID: Get what ever wood you can, and if possible, some metal from the plane.
ANTHONY: Got it.
MELISSA: Hey, there's some wood over here, someone give me a hand.
[Matt walks over to help]
MATT: Let me help you.
MELISSA: Thanks.
[The sound of a siren is heard]
ANTHONY: Uh.. what the hell was that?
[Tree's begin to fly from the ground]
SAYID: RUN! NOW!
[The four run back towards the beach]
MELISSA: What the heck is that thing!?
MATT: I don't know, but I certainly don't want to wait and see!
ANTHONY: Shut up and run!
[Anthony falls]
ANTHONY: Dammit, my foot!
MATT: Aw crap!
[Matt turns around to help Anthony, everything goes quiet. Melissa and Sayid look back, then suddenly and explosion happens where Matt and Anthony are]
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Questions:
On Island
What was making the noise and throwing trees? What is the status of Matt and Anthony after the explosion?
Flashback
What is in the package? Who was on the phone?
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